Wednesday

I wrote "Wednesday" on August 13,2013

~Wednesday~

By: Paige Taylor

Time is passing quickly and precisely

And yet, strangers we remain.

Going forward, but standing still

Together, yet apart

To care for someone,

But have no care of what will ever become.

Time is precious, but tis being wasted.

To feel so close, and yet so distant, is present.

To be by one’s side and yet always feel alone.

 

Kind and cruel

Warm and cold

Opposites are continued to be attracted.

To have fallen in love with a stranger, I thought,

I only knew.

 

To completely misinterpret their actions

Or do they speak closer, bringing one to the realization

That opposite directions we both choose to go.

=Conclusion= weak points are noticed

=Solution= Communication

-to allow yourself

An open mind

-to be objective

-to be aware,

= Than begin to repair.

Reviews

[Haley]

there are so many things i love about this. this is probably my favorite so far. i relate to the paradoxical nature of this kind of dynamic, in my personality, and with my boyfriend. "=Conclusion= weak points are noticed

=Solution= Communication

-to allow yourself

An open mind

-to be objective

-to be aware,

= Than begin to repair"

those final lines resonate with me as well. i feel like your awareness, your emotions, perspective, objectivity... and the way seemingly contrary polarities in your personality complement one another like pieces to a puzzle; i see all of this in your writing and these are many of the same traits i see in myself as well. thank you for your beautiful soul and thank you for giving me hope that i'm not meant to walk this earth alone, on the outside looking in.