Dream

we got many dreams in life...but when that lil hope dies we chose to give up in our dreams...

Going to the ocean
Moving back to mountain
All I had known was
We could stay there
For a little more while

You wanna be a girl
Who can conquer anything
You wanna be a boy
Who can achieve anything

But when the times comes
You all chose to give up
Give up all you had your dreams on

Reviews

[MarkAndTheOcean]

Nice little poem. The burden of dreams can be very heavy, and dreams can change as we grow up or can be achieved through other ways we might not understand, like being passed onto others, like chapters in a big book.

But there is always a bitter sweet feeling to them, even when we succeed. But we should keep on dreaming, dreams are very pretty, they make life more exciting :)

[A.K]

but a little mistake in life is enough to drown all those dreams we all had been longing for...But a little success can also help to achieve all those dreams we been waiting for... ヾ(•ω•`)o and thanks for the review...hope u have a grt day ahead

[MarkAndTheOcean]

No prob, hope you're having a good day too :)