Ongoing

the spirit we felt

 the power we got

 the laugh we had

 the pain... we suffered 

 all shattered like a torn pieces of paper...

the love we had 

the agony which made us suffer

why bother it?

 smile we had on our face

 the care we received 

joyfulness we felt

were took away without thinking of a second

 it went off like a swirling winds

 takes a stone away....

Author's Note

Re wrote in different form...hope its nice

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Relationships can give so much but they can also take much away when they fail. That's where your poem took me.

Chris

[A.K]

Thanks for reading...it not only takes much away but also leaves us with a unforgettable pain...anyway thanks for the review

[TheUnknownName]

i like it, its a little hard to read i had to go back through it a second time but its good.

[A.K]

thanks for reading it ...its my pleasure you like it...and i would like to say sorry if theres a mistake...this poem was composed with quick thought,,,,i know its hard to know the meanings at first read...hope you enjoy other creation as well...