Cruel Destiny

Cruel Destiny

A Poem by A.K
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Tried my Best to write

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Climbing across the hill
Walking towards the road
Unknown  to the world...
Unknown to the life...
What awaits is the wonderful and cruel destiny.

Fighting to make peace .
Fighting to make  rivalry .
Fighting to make a lead,
Fighting to make a speech,
But what they achieved? 



Willing to give up the pride 
Willing to give up the life
Willing to make sacrifice..
Willing to kill innocent
Is that what we did?

Playing across the world 
Singing along the songs
Crying between the words
Depressed along the soul
Is what we went through?


A wonderful life 
A wonderful love 
but when the times arrives
 its a broken heart  and 
A broken world
Is this what they say  cruel destiny?

© 2020 A.K


Author's Note

A.K
The pictures above doesn't belong to me...ignore if Grammarly mistake arises...hope it nice...waiting for your reviews

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Marcus Aurelius said once " Whatever this is that I am, it is flesh and a little spirit and an intelligence. Throw away your books, stop letting yourself be distracted." I Felt the audacity entangled in the speaker's fear " The unknown" the feels of being foreign to a unfamiliar world how right off the bat it's not kind to strangers. To play on the use of birds, we all have a song to sing yet will feel foreign to others and molding that song into society is inevitably going to happen. I loved the line "Playing across the world
Singing along the songs." Talks of eternity of the tears hangs inside the soul forever. Gambling with life and its games win or lose situations can occur when just singing along to blend in and drift along time as your last companion that never leaves you alone. Keep writing I caught alot of ideas in your writing sincerely your friend in writing and life

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.K

4 Years Ago

i am glad you like the poem..though the lines were randomly kept...i am glad again that u caught som.. read more
Andrew Nelson Stewart

4 Years Ago

Absolutely you as well :) . Keep writing



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Marcus Aurelius said once " Whatever this is that I am, it is flesh and a little spirit and an intelligence. Throw away your books, stop letting yourself be distracted." I Felt the audacity entangled in the speaker's fear " The unknown" the feels of being foreign to a unfamiliar world how right off the bat it's not kind to strangers. To play on the use of birds, we all have a song to sing yet will feel foreign to others and molding that song into society is inevitably going to happen. I loved the line "Playing across the world
Singing along the songs." Talks of eternity of the tears hangs inside the soul forever. Gambling with life and its games win or lose situations can occur when just singing along to blend in and drift along time as your last companion that never leaves you alone. Keep writing I caught alot of ideas in your writing sincerely your friend in writing and life

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.K

4 Years Ago

i am glad you like the poem..though the lines were randomly kept...i am glad again that u caught som.. read more
Andrew Nelson Stewart

4 Years Ago

Absolutely you as well :) . Keep writing

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Added on November 4, 2020
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A.K

Kathmandu, Hindu, Nepal



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