Dark

Just came in my mind

The star's shine in the dark....
The black hole holds the glow in it...
But why the humans can't do the same...
as the dark?

Author's Note

Plz don't mind the grammar mistake...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You may have to look hard, but there are members of our species who radiate beautiful light and love wherever they go. The problem is they don't multiply their goodness enough. It falls on deaf ears.

Chris

[A.K]

Well the problem of falling into deaf ears is they multiply their goodness but to the wrong person...anyway thanks for the review ...and lets hope this caged world(lockdown) became a free world........

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, looking forward to a lockdown free world. Tomorrow we will be in lockdown for the second time :(

[A.K]

maybe ..or maybe not...who knows tomorrow may be the end of the lockdown😁

[Vari]

There are people like a burning candle which keeps lightning other darkness. Rest your poem was simple and express what you feel like... Keep writing more rest have a wonderful day ahead :)

[A.K]

It was just a 1% part of my of my thought .thanks for the advise i will surely try to express more in the other topics...

[Vari]

Looking forward new friend :)

[A.K]

sure😁...hope the new creation wont let you down