Forever

Forever

A Poem by Bre
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The truth about it.

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What if we could live forever?

Never dying, always living.

Sounds good.

No need for dreams,

You live long enough to not need goals.

No more spending time with your loved ones,

They will be their long enough to change their opinion anyway.

No need for health,

No matter what you do to yourself you will be their anyways.

No need to care,

All you need is to live and you already have that.

You won’t die.

No judgment day.

No trying again.

No one missing you because you are still here.

No one thinking about how important you are.

No true love missing you more than anything.

I don’t want to live forever,

Cause death is half the fun of living.

© 2013 Bre


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Holy, what an interesting concept you've conjured up here, I guess that'd be true, and imagine how tired we'd be....interesting, enjoyable read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, last few lines're awesome and it's really a great and deep write. lovely piece...100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


The worst part of death is the pain of loss your loved ones suffer...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Bre
Bre

Alberquerque, NM



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