Returning To Me

Returning To Me

A Poem by Little Mouse
"

Now that wasn't so bad after all.

"

No more words

Interjections twist

Less of you

 

The wall is gone

Corner turned

More of me

 

This is between Him and I now

Check your bags at the door please

I have so much to say and no one to say it to.

 

As I exclaim…                  I’m so pissed off!

Tears bursting underneath

I am left with Me.

 

As that still small voice appears...

Wait... this isn’t so bad,

and don’t forget to water the plants.

 

 

Little Mouse

June 20, 2008

© 2011 Little Mouse


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I like the sense of humor contained in the last few lines...a final shot over the bow in parting! Well expressed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


here the character appears to be broken yet optimistic good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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