SnoozeA Chapter by Little Mouse
Jill was distraught, she woke up to another odd dream. She was at a concert and suddenly found her lover, a seat behind her. As she turned around he smacked a huge kiss on her and she leaned in for another... “This love has taken its toll on me, she said goodbye too many times before…”—she reached over and hit snooze. She had left her marriage, model house, and was on her own for the first time ever. Living her life backwards. Dabbling into writing, though she was no writer. It was as if she was finding herself through the words (rather distracting herself), though stress had taken its toll. Good advice from a friend had clear instructions to go pick out a new book that was pink or had shoes on the cover—anything but self-help. Jill responded quickly perusing the new releases and ran right into “Eat, Pray, Love”—it was perfect. Just a few pages in and Jill realized she could have written this memoir (for the most part)—if only she had beaten this author to it or had paid better attention in literature class, or had the gumption (but perhaps she did, perhaps she should try). Perhaps she would write a fictitious novel, instead of a memoir, but say the main character was Jill (since she’d get tired of writing “I”), but then eventually mix up the first and second person tenses as she got on a roll—but she knew her audience would “get it” so she’d not be concerned with writing it one way or the other—she’d do both, why not? Defy the laws of writing (or was this more common than she knew), she’d be a cross-referenced fiction/memoir author leaving the audience to question what was truth or fiction. Or her editor would fix it later. Perfect. Jill’s health was failing. She had reached depths of depression she was unaware of and finally asked for something to take the edge off, to which the doctor replied how smart she was to be that aware. But something was still very wrong. Doctors ordered blood test after blood test all to find out she did not have any auto-immune diseases—since one did not exist called heart-brokenitis. Though she did discover she had extremely low Vitamin D—which can bring on a slew of things like depression and flu-like symptoms all the way to a high-risk for cancer. She was prescribed a mega-dose, eight weeks and she’d be tested again. She was told to be patient, to bear with them, when she requested the test again at only the four-week mark, as well as a slew of other tests. Jill was good at being patient, but a mega-dose scared her given her obsession with googling her ailments, finding blogs (which she knew she should not be reading) holding varying conflicting medical advice. At least all other tests were negative giving her some peace of mind—other than the large bruise on her arm since they had to fill six painful swapped out vials with her blood. The technician had approached Jill, clearly annoyed she’d requested so many tests and snootily set all the vials down and said, “Are you ready for this? And next time, come in the afternoon when I don’t have so many other patients waiting.” Jill replied, “I’ve been fasting, I might faint after all that, do you think—”, the technician cut her off, “Oh well.” Jill realized she’d brought this all on herself, she’d asked for all those tests, she’d have to tough it out. Perhaps there was a lesson in it for her—she always believed that. This lesson, she didn’t need all those tests, trying to figure this out so desperately was causing her body more stress. She had kept in minimal touch with her ex-to-be and he had sent her an article titled: “Those Low in D, Twice as Likely to Die”—nice. She actually was happy to see the article wanting desperately to get the word out that all should test their D levels, so clearly the word was out—and even another friend had a friend-of-a-friend whose doctor said it’s becoming an epidemic.” “…Twice as likely to die” came back to mind—she did feel close to dying, when she found another lump. The last one was passed off to be fibrocystic, a fluid-filled common lump that would increase and decrease with the fluctuations of hormones— truly not a problem. Just another ailment to make Jill worry or to keep her b***s perky (bonus)—but mostly to make her worry. She was certain she would not be as alarmed this time as the doctor exclaimed, “This is a HUGE lump” (the last thing you want your doctor to say), comprehensive screening is in order straight away.” “Alright,” Jill complied, “but is another x-ray really necessary? The last one went away. These are common. A sonogram should do.” “No” the doctor replied. “Fine”—at least she had gained back some of the weight she had lost—eating by force. The more weight she gained perhaps her b***s would come back hiding the lump, so at least she’d be less compelled to keep touching it—yup, still there. And she did have a Vitamin D deficiency after all—the other latest headline, "90% of Women Found with Cancer Had Low Vitamin D Levels"—should she be more concerned this time as she pushed it out of her mind. She refused to worry, and if God were to take her, perhaps that would be easier than figuring out what the heck she was doing. Though she knew cancer was certainly not the way to go, “Please Lord, I trust you, but let it be something else, OK?” Jill decided to take the much needed break. She packed “Eat, Pray, Love” in her pool bag and went out for some sun—or Vitamin D rather. Her girlfriend (also going through a separation) met her there and chatted away—really all Jill wanted to do was read her book. Her friend had left her husband around the same time, was already dating her lover, and talking about the stream of houses they’d already put offers on—not to mention she’d kissed a handful of boys too. Jill wasn’t dating, no lover in sight, a kiss (what’s that? In her dreams, since it had been geez, beyond a year now! She’d not gone a week in her life without one—until she got married), and hadn’t even sold her house—the one her husband was still in for that matter. And with this housing market, good Lord! But that wasn’t even the worst of it. Every time she met with Mr. Ex she had a plan or paperwork to review or something, he wanted to small talk—clearly dragging his feet trying to put off the impending divorce. To make matters worse, a year had already passed and Mr. Ex had turned from Mr. Difficult to: Mr. Sweet, Mr. Accommodating, Mr. How-Are-You, Mr. What’s the Hurry, Mr. Hope You Are Well, Mr. What Problem, Mr. I Still Love You, Mr. I Wouldn’t Have Left You, Mr. Hope To See You Soon—clearly a trick, right? Good Lord! Good Lord—lately her favorite thing to say as issues kept piling on. She hoped that’s all she would have to say to remind the Lord that yes, he’s good, but to call on him out of exasperation, to symbolize that she’d take all that was thrown at her, and just keep on praising—like good ol’ Job had—but “Good Lord, seriously! What next! Alright already… Help!” And yes, Jill continued to petition, “I know you won’t tell me it’s ok to divorce, but can you come down here and tell me to do it anyway? Please.” Jill knew this would never happen. And she was truly convicted to do what God wanted, knowing it would be the best thing for her, whether it was what she wanted or not—damn! Since Jill didn’t have the answers yet, perhaps her friend in “Eat, Pray, Love” did. Jill certainly wasn’t prepared to follow suit with all the other separatees who dove straight into dating—and as it turned out, so did the author in “Eat, Pray, Love”. Was something wrong with Jill? Ah yes, heart-brokenitis—no cure yet, should she start a fundraiser, an association…perhaps a book would do in the meantime. Jill continued to read her friend excerpts from “Eat, Pray, Love” as they laughed at the authors uncanny adventures that spoke so perfectly to both of them. Though her time with her friend was fun she was pleased her friend had another engagement—ah finally alone with my book, but damn it’s hot she thought. Jill went for a dip and the moment her toes hit the water she was approached. Well, he seemed nice enough she thought, and maybe she should be somewhat social, so she chatted awhile, but he talked so much her fingers were about to wrinkle. She finally excused herself to swim, an excuse to kindly move on, in hopes to reach her pool chair and book soon. As soon as Jill sat down, book in hand, another random pool guy a chair over said, “Sure wish the sun would come back out.” Jill bluntly replied, “Hmph, it was too hot anyway”—with her book so close to her face clearly he would stop talking. Immediately followed by, “So where do you go for nightlife around here?” (Sigh!) Even more bluntly, “I don’t go out.” Kindness took over as he continued to chat, an hour later and three propositions—“Are you sure you are not going out tonight?” “NO! I’m really not! I’m a writer, that’s what I do. That’s all I’m doing tonight. Really, not going out. And I’ve had my fill of sun. Time to go. Hope you find something to do, take care.” (That’s the summary.) He replied, “See you next time.” (Oh dear.) Next time Jill thought she’d bring her iPod to guard her time of solace, in lieu of a fake book jacket a funny friend suggested she create that says, “I’ve got an STD, what to do?” Haha, funny, Jill retorted, “If only I weren’t so concerned about what people think, but yeah, that’s pretty funny. Perhaps a book jacket that says, ‘I’m Married’, if only that would work, that would encourage them!” Or how about, “Once You Go Black, You Never Go Back” “But what about the black guy from the other day? What if he—” “Ah, that won’t work, scratch that.” It got funnier as we continued. Perhaps, “I’m a Lesbian” the friend replied— “Encouraging as well perhaps? Oh geez.” After several more funny titles they both agreed NO book cover would work and if this was her biggest problem in life, well, come to think of it, it was not such a problem but comic relief as the friend replied—“Enjoy your pool time Stella!” Now if only Jill was divorced and vacationing in Jamaica while all this was occurring—something told her she still wouldn’t be getting her groove back, not now, not yet, and certainly not like Stella! Jill had something else to be doing, if only she could figure out what it was, she’d continue to be patient (what was starting to seem like some odd space of ever expanding time where she’d be losing her window to ever have a family, though not truly convinced this was what she even wanted—ahem). While walking away she thought of a perfect book cover, “Abstinence and I Mean It—Really No, I’m Not Going Out With You Ever and I’m Not Having Sex (not unless it was with her lover in her dreams), And Seriously Not With You So Don’t Bother, and Yes We’d Have To Be Good Friends First Anyway, and Oh, Don’t Let Me Forget To Mention—We’d Have To Be Married First.”… It occurred to Jill this could backfire—how would the book designer possibly come up with an intelligent design, too many words for sure! Ten minutes later, Jill stirred to, “I knew how it felt to be another one in need of someone to show the way until you saw a part of me that nobody else could see and my life hasn't been the same...”—she turned snooze off this time. And scrawled down her dream the moment her eyes opened—a routine she'd now done for several years whenever memories allowed. Made coffee, got online for way too long, decided to start her book, wrote her first chapter, and then finally decided to drag herself to the pool—“Eat, Pray, Love” would be in tow of course. But then she wondered, was it ok to reference another book so many times, would she need permissions? Perhaps the same publisher would pick her up? Yes, that would be smart on their part. Perhaps she’d become friends with the author—in her mind she already had. Perhaps Jill overanalyzed things. One thing she knew for sure, she’d need a good editor. And then suddenly fear set in, Jill had not planned out her book. No outline. No…—she stopped herself. This was “a new Jill” and she was flying without a—oh that’s too cliché’—her first chapter was just fine. And all the rest would be just fine, if not, who cares! Pleased with her newfound flow of carefree writing she hoped this was how the rest of her life could start to progress—no plan, just doing what’s next without over-thinking—mistakes be damned. With no other obligations, all she had to do right now could be pretty darn simple: eat and go to pool. ***
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Added on July 3, 2008Last Updated on July 7, 2008 AuthorLittle MouseVAAboutLittle Mouse -:3 )~~~ If I wasn't working I'd be writing. I'm a new writer, poet, venturing into stories. I think it's best to review each others work prior to sending a friend request, please,.. more..Writing
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