Nature Speaks

Nature Speaks

A Poem by Little Mouse
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Inspired by a Heron flying by.

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Truth brings sanity and peace

A great release

 

God has us in his hands and gives us signs

Especially when we heed to him, other times he is silent

 

Like the Heron, a wading bird, frequenting oozy rivers

Yet so rare to see

 

Oddly he gives me a Heron at key times

And today I saw one fly over and away. 



Little Mouse

May 23, 2008 

© 2008 Little Mouse


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"Truth brings sanity and peace

A great release"

---Is a great line, it really is. Once in a while I read something like this and I feel like there are others who are naturally invested in seeing things others dont.. good read, nice work. bravo


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice poem... Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's short but thats not bad. I thought it was really great and the opening two lines really brought me in, and to me made this poem. It was really light and hopeful, which is nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the "Oddly he gives me a Heron at key time
And today I saw one fly over and away".

It seems like a key line in the poem, in that the reader understands an impending reason behind this key time in the poet's life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very beautiful to say the least. It is short yet it lingers in your head longer than a boring 3 page poem. Job well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Truth brings sanity and peace

A great release"

---Is a great line, it really is. Once in a while I read something like this and I feel like there are others who are naturally invested in seeing things others dont.. good read, nice work. bravo


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like this write, I think it's wonderful. You write very well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love the way you used birds as the animal here... Birds are like symbols of freedom and being carefree... True enough, there's something so airy about your poem, almost ethereal...
I really like reading it, the ending was perfect.
Keep it up! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this a lot

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I love how you used your words to flow.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A well crafted poem, a definite pleasure to read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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