I surrender, again.
If you feel desperate for someone, fill the void with God. Put him in that place. It may start to make sense. I do this with love songs. Until you do, you will continue feeling like you are seeking something or someone, and will have trouble filling this space no matter what you do. But even with resolve to do this, knowing he is there doesnt always feel like he is there. He may seem out of reach or not easily seen or foundbut always believe he is there.
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Wow!!:) I love this piece alot:) Its so peacful and intimate:) Its also very inspiring and it reminds me of the right balance in life: God at the center, with all the other pieces falling around Him:)
Kudos to you!!:)
i love the poem or song it is really beautiful but nothing personal but it botherd me seeing it upside down to me that is like seeing the cross upside down it just dosent feel right sorry i would rather him be up in my face any day but everyone is diffrent.hugs
Would be a really lovely song. I would run a lot during my early 20s, didnt know where I was going. He usually always foundd me, or I am just running in circles and ended up running into him. lol. I like what you say in your notes about the painter. Nice write.
The religious tone...one you know well. I like the part
Roads will lead me
Back to you
Not sure how
Not sure when
Keeps you grounded and make the piece not come off as preachy. BTW...is that Jesus in the picture? If so, why is he upside down. Was that some artistic purpose?
Little Mouse -:3 )~~~
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