Till 2010

Till 2010

A Poem by Little Mouse
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Brief inspiration and contemplation during the eclipse

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The rising of the sun
A mystery
If not for the axis spin

The rising of the moon
A mystery
If not for the fall of day

The blocking of the moon
A mystery
If not for the position of the earth

The setting of the sun
A mystery
If not for the faith it will again rise

The man in the moon
A mystery
If not for the words he speaks
Telling us he will be here
Evermore
But briefly gone again in 2010

The falling star
Simply embraced
Because of my faith in God

The eclipse of my heart
Total
If not for my faith in Love

The brief passing
An inspiring moment
Reminding that darkness pales in quantity
To the ever shining light



Little Mouse
February 20, 2008

© 2008 Little Mouse


Author's Note

Little Mouse
So this needs a bit of work, but I posted it anyway since I wanted it up the night of the eclipse. : )
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I LOVE the eclipse. I love the awe in mystery you respectfully remind the reader to appreciate, despite our now scientific world! Nice Flow.

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Added on February 21, 2008
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