It's Over

It’s over
You said
Done
Complete
It will get easier
Move on
Ween off
It’s onward
Ho
Ahead
Let’s go
Complete
Done
And Free

But who will feed me?

 

 

Little Mouse
July 31, 2007

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

hmmm, I know I've visited this poem before, but apparently left no comment?! How rude!!
OK, let me right myself.

Oh, right, it left me speechless (again).
I'm gonna go with Mother Earth. She will feed you over and over and over again.
Sorry for the painful ending, short, yes, sweet? Well, not for us really. But, perhaps around the next bend we'll find something....

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

Eeehehheheee!!!! This poem makes me laugh!!! Aww, it really IS short and sweet!!! ^_^ My favorite part was , "It's onward ho ahead let's go." I liked that flow and rhyme, so cute!

[M Lamont]

I reread this today and come up with the following response. Hope you like it. (Not sure if I will title this and post...hmmmm...maybe later.)

Who will feed me?
Oh, no
Did I let my supplier go?

They said goodbye
And I waved away
Even looked forward to a new day

But provisons I did not make
And starving has made a place
What did I do before?
Oh, wait?
I know

I can feed myself!

[R. Gene MacDonald]

That is the question isn't it? Ready to start life, ready to experience it. Now who will jumpstart me?

[M Lamont]

I love the whole "I'm movin' on, getting on with my life, I'm over it....." but was floored by the last line of self doubt. We need that to keep us in check I guess. Great job!