Forever Never After

Love, loss, grief, and denial.

How could you go and say it is

For

Ever?

How can this be possible?

Life is short

Lived once

But for eternity

Choices made carry

Beyond this world

Life here superficial

Perhaps this choice

Will bring us love eternally

 

Such feigned self-righteous crap

God knows my heart

It hurts so badly

I quickly turn to anger

I must protect myself

And push it away

Turning this lapping dog

Into a seething wolf

Clawing at the grave

I must put you in,

For

Ever

 

But no matter how hard I try

I can

Never

 

Cover you in dirt

Never

Ever

 

And then the grip of darkness releases lighter

Did I thank you for letting me go?

 

 

Little Mouse

July 18, 2007

Reviews

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

Nice nice work! Keep writing! Peace to you and the world! Will's Gurl

[Celtic Cat]

Turning this lapping dog
Into a seething wolf
Clawing at the grave
I must put you in,

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

Wow, I would have never guessed you wrote dark stuff too!! I LOVE DARK STUFF!! :D yeah!! this was a good poem; it looks like it would be a song or something. Plus, it looks kinda like the stuff I've writen! Good!

[M Lamont]

Nice work. Love how it starts off all, like, skipping along telling us of this situation and then BAM! we get all down and dirty, the gloves come off and we are now running full speed! The break in the writing at the end gives me the feeling of slowing down, exhaustion then we end. Great job!