Self Contained

A battle with your inner voice

The inner voice

The matador

Unavoidable

Taunting the bull.

 

Color blind

Yet drawn close

Controlling me

Waving me in.

 

Confused

Angered

Taunted

Mauled

 

A well placed sword.

A charging success.

 

The matador wins

Fighting from his knees.

 

 

Little Mouse

July 19, 2007

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I see you are restoring your work. what a painstaking endeavor this is proving to be - but - it will be worth the investment. I didn't read this one. I like it. the last line especially is a great one. A charging success. You have a way with words. Well done. And I'm glad you're staying

[Celtic Cat]

Love the personification you give your inner voice(s). Very cool. Not sure who really won the battle, although it's markedly a success. Cool write!

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

Aw, that sounds so deep and dark. this was a really interesting write! I liked the format you put it in; lovely

[M Lamont]

Nothing like a good fight with yourself; intersting to write about it. If we can put this out there and have us win, why have the fight in the first place? I guess that is why they call it hindsight. Love it!