A New Song

A New Song

A Poem by Little Mouse
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Major change took me away, for now.

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You and me have taken a break

I took you for granted

Walking by you everyday

Doing other things instead

Making you wait another day

Unplayed.

 

Now I miss the black and white

Keys, sounds, stringing together song.

 

The longing will bring me back to you

I promise it won’t be long.

 

I’ll be out of practice

I know you won’t mind

I’ll find my way among the keys

And hold the pedal long

By the time I come back to you

I’ll have a different song.

 

 

Little Mouse

7/7/07

© 2008 Little Mouse


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I still love this one.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely!! This is so great!! And, it makes me think of how many activities I should be writing "I'll be back soon" poems to!!! Love the ending, very cool.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, that was cute! ^_^ the first few lines reminded me of my piano: psh! Nobody plays it all that much. Now, it's in need a tuning so badly that my mom wants to get rid of it alltogether and replace it with a keyboard. "I want it to have the sound and touch of a real piano." She says. I say, "Good luck finding one like that." I can tell just by your bio that you're a really good and professional writer! Do you have anything published? If so, that's great! I want to get my books published soon, but ah! I've been rejected once so far....

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You'll find your way back. Writing this AND sharing it here were the first two steps in that direction.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2008
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