False Ad Nauseam

Replayed false closure consolation

Nothing I say

 

could ever come out right

 

Replayed false closure

 

 ad nauseam

 

Not saying my hearts desire

 

to protect you

 

Leaving one intact

 

damage minimized

 

That’s the consolation prize

 

 

Little Mouse

May 14, 2007

Reviews

[Little Mouse]

*This is a test*... while restoring I got a new review on an old writing and it recalculated the reviews given instead of showing zero. So the silver lining to this writerscafe glitch could be we start reviewing the restored work!

[Celtic Cat]

Ugh, I know that prize. The one they didn't even know they got. Didn't notice the carefully wrapped package, the bow, the card. Just allowed to disregard. Yeah, I know that prize.
This, is a very good way to put it. Lovely.

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

huh, that was pretty interesting! Again, love the format! it seems to send out a neat message. I too feel this way sometimes. That's why I like it! ^_^

[M Lamont]

Nice write. I am between feeling sad at the end and happy for closure. I like that since I always seem to wrap things up with a definitive ending. I like this.