I'm Sorry To Me

Letting go. I'm sorry to me, I'm sorry you hurt.

I’m sorry to me.

 

I’m sorry you hurt.

 

Cuts like a knife.

 

Surreal but real.

 

You’ve yet to learn how to grieve.

 

Not in touch with your feelings.

 

You have to feel before you let it go.

 

Allow yourself to feel the hurt.

 

Don’t tuck it away for another day.

 

No, focus on the positive, ever the optimist,

 

No, no, no... feel the negative.

 

I’m sorry to me.

I'm sorry you hurt. 

 

 

Little Mouse

May 11, 2007

 

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

I love the no no no, feel the negative. Yes, stop and feel the pain, then and only then can we learn from it and move on. I read it the first time as if you were speaking to another, and the second read as if all the 'you' is still you. I liked it both ways. Not sure how you meant it, tho. I like this.

[Rion]

I like the language.
It's nice.
It's simple, or as simple as such a topic can be explained, in writing.
And, in that way, it's pure art.
Keep it up.
Rion

[Solst Rapture]

I'm sorry to me to and you, whilst I'm on it. Why not.

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

This one's my fav! Again, I liked the format and the way it really speaks to me is astounding. Keep going, you're so good!

[M Lamont]

Wow, I love when people turn inward and write. It's tough to do even though we know the subject so well. Thanks for sharing!