Mundane Painting

Mundane Painting

A Poem by Little Mouse
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Covered in disguise and the mundane missing the big picture.

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Who are you?

Are you lost?

Covered in disguise.

 

Busy yourself with mundane things

Blind to the bigger picture

Missing symbolism and lessons.

 

You may think you are painting the chapel

But you are really changing the colors in your mind.

You may think you are selling your goods

But you are the one who needs to buy.

 

Who are you?

Are you lost?

Can you ever make it back?

 

May God strip you to your core

Whatever it takes for the big picture

Look to the space around the object

It is there that lies the secret

Curing the ordinary.


 

Little Mouse

May 10, 2007


 

 

 

© 2008 Little Mouse


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ooooh, very cool, indeed!!! See, I looked at the picture and thought...hmm..naked people! And you took me someplace very different (thank God!!) I love this whole piece, especially the 'you think, but you are' sequence, very awesome indeed.
Excellent!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ooooh, very cool, indeed!!! See, I looked at the picture and thought...hmm..naked people! And you took me someplace very different (thank God!!) I love this whole piece, especially the 'you think, but you are' sequence, very awesome indeed.
Excellent!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmmm....nice work. I beleive I know you well enought o read into this. Won't say much more so that others can come away with their own take on this.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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