Smile

Smile

A Poem by Angel_Rose1979
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A quick tale of a person who was told to hide their depression.

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Smiling is good,
That's what they all said,
So I tried the best I could,
But I still found it as painful as can be.
They wanted me to hide it,
They didn't like me crying,
They begged for me to try it,
Although I really was trying,
I guess they couldn't see it,
Because on the inside I'm slowly dying,
But I can't quit,
Because I know they hate to see me crying.
So I did my best,
I put on a mask,
It was almost like a test,
Because this was no easy task.
I felt like I'd been city cursed,
My mood began to fall apart,
As my condition worsened,
And began to rip at my heart.
Then one day I decided I couldn't take it,
I got ready to face my fears,
It was time to end it,
I was tired of hiding my tears.
Now I'm gone,
I became unknown,
I did as they said I should,
My time here is now done,
I died alone,
After all, in the end, they all lied, smiling isn't good.

© 2017 Angel_Rose1979


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Such emotion, staying true to yourself...sadness is an emotion you may freely feel. No one owns your emotions save you. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Depression...such a sad thing to see people suffer with this and even harder for the person who suffers with it.
You left this on such a sad, hearwrenching note which was because of the powrful writing that came before. It can never be easy to write a piece on such a difficult subject for which so many suffer.
I applaud you in writing this.
Its kind of difficult to find the right words to leave with.
So in closing i will say, this was well written and thought out. I ams sure many will relate to it.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2017
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Angel_Rose1979
Angel_Rose1979

Cedar City, UT



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I'm 15, so naturally sometimes my grammar sucks, sorry bout that, but I mostly just write macabre and creepy poetry, sometimes based on mental health, just wanted to be able to put it out there more..

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