To Far Gone

To Far Gone

A Poem by Angel_Rose1979

I tried to wait,
But it took so long,
Now I fear its much too late,
I am to far gone.

Upon my cheek rests a single tear,
I sit here and cry,
I am filled with fear,
As I beg for God to let me die.

Now my time has come,
It took so long,
I have waited some,
But I was already, to far gone.

© 2017 Angel_Rose1979


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Full of pain.Full of sorrow You and i are connected. " In the end does the pain go away" that was suppose to be my goodbye

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is very nice and eloquent. You really feel for the speaker. Though, I am a bit unclear as to whether you mean, "Too far gone"? Seeing as you used it that way several times in the poem, I am confused,

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like how you kept the flow going. There's a nice rhythm to it. Emotionally real and well crafted. Nice job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Swept away at the succinct telling of intense emotion... Each line left me feeling a bit farther from my own capacity to bear... Sweetly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel_Rose1979

7 Years Ago

Many thanks my friend.
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Many welcomes, friend...

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Angel_Rose1979
Angel_Rose1979

Cedar City, UT



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I'm 15, so naturally sometimes my grammar sucks, sorry bout that, but I mostly just write macabre and creepy poetry, sometimes based on mental health, just wanted to be able to put it out there more..

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