AGT

I have been across the ocean of love

I thought that I was floating on a cloud

She held me under her spell and twisted me until I bled

I thought that I was happier than I ever was before 

Baby I got it 

I got it

I got the love flowing through me and that's the love for myself

I thought she was my ride or die 

That we were going to be happily ever after

I was surely wrong

All I heard was your worthless

Your hopeless

Even my own mother wasn't on my side

Will I just climb into myself and fall apart or will I rise victorious

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Intensely emotive and superbly personal. The line where even the mother wasn't on his side just brought it all to a new level. Thanks for sharing.

[K writes]

This write is very well written, enjoyed

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The poem was well written. I enjoyed the read, and of course, I'm rooting for you to be victorious. The title got me thinking. I looked it up, but I don't think I got it right. What did you mean?

[littlekinglord]

it was going to be a song for Americas got talent but I couldn't finish it

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Okay, then I got it right. Thanks.