Waiting in A Tree

I'm gonna wait on this limb

All by myself and count my sins

While ants go marching two by two

Hang on, Hang on waiting for somebody to come

Hang on, Hang on rescue me from what I have done

I should go cause you are late

Stuck with the hook, forgot the bait

The seconds crawl, the minutes stall

Rock paper scissors

 the paper covers rock

I can't even win against myself

 I'm all out of luck

Rock papers scissors 

the paper flies away

Saying: I don't got all day

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Superb emotive! This poem takes you into its world and feel with the poetic persona what otherwise could not be shared or transmitted with someone other than ourselves. How tough it is to have to wait for something that takes time when we do't got all day to do so. The depth and feeling are profound. Thanks for sharing. Frederick.

[Chris Shaw]

I liked the visuals in this write and how you passed the time waiting. Some minor edits are needed in the final stanza.which will improve the overall flow.

Chris