Don't Hesitate

old work from a prompt challenge i did. prompt was Hesitation

Please don't hesitate 
Don't give our actions 
Time to be realized 
As mistakes
Don't let time come
Flooding into this moment 
That was going to be 
Preserved forever
Don't listen to the voice 
That is telling you that
What we're doing is wrong
Don't remember the past 
Or worry over the future
Just live in this moment 
And don't hesitate 
Because too soon it will all 
Be over.

Reviews

[Stephen C Morgan]

I really like this very much - I can also imagine this being a scene from Absurdism with very disjointed movements - you know what I mean :D

[Hazel Pring]

hahaha thanks and yeh I was thinking the exact same thing as i put it on here :L pity we're moving on now really.

[Stephen C Morgan]

I agree! It sure is going to be strange moving onto realism.

*read in American accent* DId that get you into character?? :P

[Dr. Wood ?]

The line 'don't let time come flooding into this moment' is brilliant in my eyes.....You did very well with this

[Hazel Pring]

thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it C: