The girl on the swing.

The girl on the swing.

A Poem by indu
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..wondering about her first crush

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Swinging high towards the dreams of the first love

eagerly to know the beginning,

how it is, to be loved.

When the eyes meet. To Search in them for everything she ever wanted.

 

Unknown senses wakening

in the arms of desire.

She wondered if he felt It ..If he ever read her mind,

to know how deeply she loved him.

 

It’s like chasing the sun; she sighed.

Swaying to and fro on a barren object,

feeling far and far away

From her dream, desire and Herself.

 

The swing stood still. As she walked away,

Towards a note of ‘what if ..not’.

Vacuuming her heart, to feel the weight of emptiness.

 -The melancholy girl.

© 2010 indu


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Wow…
Very realistic…
Each girl goes through…
Such.. first love and its crush….
Very apt choice of words…
To depict the unavoidable dilemma….of girlhood….
Loved it…


Posted 14 Years Ago


a sweet sentiment; a whisper of hope on the horizon

Posted 14 Years Ago



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indu
indu

Cochin, India



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I have always felt the urge to write.. but I am uncertain about the texture, technics etc. (if there are any). I have written poems much more than prose though I am not a big fan of poems.. Fact i.. more..

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