Night
A Poem by
indu
..my lonely night
The low talks,
the chanting,
the murmurs and the thoughts within.
Then,
the yellow bulb spreading warmth across the room.
And, the empty hours.
© 2010 indu
Reviews
Awe sad, but this is a good poem. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
yea..the loneliness ._.
Posted 14 Years Ago
yea..the loneliness ._.
chanting and murmurs all within yourself ! loneliness personified .. nice write
Posted 14 Years Ago
chanting and murmurs all within yourself ! loneliness personified .. nice write
. i found him and then i mucked it all up ... some of it is fate and some of it is folly ... if only ... you weave magic ... intense magic ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
. i found him and then i mucked it all up ... some of it is fate and some of it is folly ... if only ... you weave magic ... intense magic ...
we are not like birds that mate for life; sometimes one goes their way; sometimes we outgrow the other, or each other...but lonely is a emptiness that has to wait...your words tell this tale very well
Posted 14 Years Ago
we are not like birds that mate for life; sometimes one goes their way; sometimes we outgrow the other, or each other...but lonely is a emptiness that has to wait...your words tell this tale very well
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Added on August 7, 2010
Last Updated on August 7, 2010
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indu Cochin, India
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I have always felt the urge to write.. but I am uncertain about the texture, technics etc. (if there are any).
I have written poems much more than prose though I am not a big fan of poems.. Fact i..
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