wonderland

my very first poem. from a younger age.

wonder land wonder land
i thought that it was never planned
it must have been fate
that the rabbit was late
still i followed this odd creature
it was better then the teacher
to get lost in wonderland

Author's Note

i found this with a little bit of searching.

Reviews

[Serenity]

I liked how it incorperated you in a way falling into wonderland in a sense, got tired of listening to the teacher so you daydreamed instead like Alice did.

[Emma Keynes]

It's a sweet poem. Innocent and sweet. :)

[smilempsn]

Reminded me of Alice in the Wonderland :)