you

I found you inside another
Not belonging to me I needed you more more than I needed the others
You are going to be mine I don't care who I hurt for you
You will belong to me
I'll chain you till your bleeding love for me
You will love me
I'll change you till your all mine
I am darkness and you will breath me in

Reviews

[soulesswriter]

kinda scary but nice.:) in a way it shows your unconditionally love just to an extreme right.is this litteraly though i was confused about that if its litterly its kinda creepy but cool at the same time.idk i feel like its a paradox which gives it a nice ring i think?

[FateDictates]

I love the strong somber, FYI tone....

[Emily B]

I've wandered through four of your poems and came back to this one. It's scary as hell. I've experienced the chain and bleeding love. I couldn't look away from your darkness.

[BubblingMe]

I love the darkness, if it is dark, I feel that I'm free :)