Falling from Afar

a little something I wrote from my deeper thoughts on falling for someone from afar

In this crisis that I've succumbed to

time

and time again

there is no end

we will complete our rounds

and rounds again

to this mourned and ominous fate

of love, of lust

forever we will go on

untouched, unheld, cold, and broken

Author's Note

Feel free to leave your thoughts. I'm more than open to constructive criticism and hoping to improve on my writing.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a painful, powerful cycle of love and loss. I can relate far too well, dear poet.