The repetition of "the misery inside... it dissolves over time" adds a meditative rhythm, pulling the reader into a contemplative space. I find the juxtaposition of inevitability ("we all will evolve") with the element of choice ("not all will survive") especially thought-provoking, as it invites us to reflect on our own paths and decisions.
Your words feel deeply honest and relatable, capturing the delicate balance between struggle and hope. The metaphorical yet grounded approach you’ve taken allows readers to resonate with the journey of evolving despite life's challenges. Thank you for sharing such an introspective and profound piece. Keep writing—your work truly resonates!
You are too generous with me. I believe you know better.
1 Hour Ago
While I appreciate your humility, I want to assure you that my praise was sincere and heartfelt. You.. read moreWhile I appreciate your humility, I want to assure you that my praise was sincere and heartfelt. Your poem resonated deeply with me because of its raw honesty and the profound way it explores the themes of evolution, choice, and resilience. These are truths that many readers, including myself, can connect with on a personal level.
I hope you continue to trust in your voice and the unique perspective you bring to your writing—it truly matters.
Please keep sharing your work. It’s a privilege to witness your creative journey!
55 Minutes Ago
It's not humility, you already know what I have to say
The repetition of "the misery inside... it dissolves over time" adds a meditative rhythm, pulling the reader into a contemplative space. I find the juxtaposition of inevitability ("we all will evolve") with the element of choice ("not all will survive") especially thought-provoking, as it invites us to reflect on our own paths and decisions.
Your words feel deeply honest and relatable, capturing the delicate balance between struggle and hope. The metaphorical yet grounded approach you’ve taken allows readers to resonate with the journey of evolving despite life's challenges. Thank you for sharing such an introspective and profound piece. Keep writing—your work truly resonates!
You are too generous with me. I believe you know better.
1 Hour Ago
While I appreciate your humility, I want to assure you that my praise was sincere and heartfelt. You.. read moreWhile I appreciate your humility, I want to assure you that my praise was sincere and heartfelt. Your poem resonated deeply with me because of its raw honesty and the profound way it explores the themes of evolution, choice, and resilience. These are truths that many readers, including myself, can connect with on a personal level.
I hope you continue to trust in your voice and the unique perspective you bring to your writing—it truly matters.
Please keep sharing your work. It’s a privilege to witness your creative journey!
55 Minutes Ago
It's not humility, you already know what I have to say
i love your writing so much, always intentional & i can tell you have a specific thing you want to convey, whether it be a feeling, an experience, or just a thought, you depict it very nicely. a bit metaphorical, sometimes simple, always effective; it all blends together very nicely! never stop writing, david!
Posted 2 Days Ago
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2 Days Ago
I wouldn't stop if they paid me. Good therapy is too expensive.
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