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Author's Note

Reviews

[Carmel Kirk]

We really gonna do this? You're absolutely terrible! I have published works from over a decade ago. Actually DID SOMETHING(how about that?) Again, that song was something I wrote for AI and it's STILL better than anything you've wrote. You're about 7 levels below what you think. Cliche, boring as hell, limited vocabulary. It's terrible.

This is you:

Ok, ready..

Show light
This endless fight.
A faceless blight.
Stroke a cat(ummm wtf)
Rhythm falls flat
In the endless vat.
I don't know where I'm at.

I'm not afraid to admit when someone has "it." Yeah, that's NOT you. Not even close.

[Davidgeo]

This is pre teen levels of trolling. Get your s**t together dude. I feel embarrassed for you.

[Carmel Kirk]

It's impressive how you've managed to incorporate your knack for saying NOTHING--so seamlessly. Fom poetry to comment section. Words without bite. Consistency is key!

[Davidgeo]

I get what trying to do, but, you're just embarrassing yourself. Your trolling is on the level of a high school freshman. You gotta do better man. Work on it, you'll get there kiddo.

[Carmel Kirk]

Twice now. You started it initially. Unprovoked, pretentious. We had a little back and forth, then it was over. AGAIN, you pop back up and do the same s**t. What do you want, attention? Validation? Keep writing about stroking cats, f**k off and leave me alone!

[Davidgeo]

You're just too sensitive my guy. Relax, it's the internet, this matters only as much as you let it. Once you realize that you'll be okay. Good luck man.