The Tick Tock People

The Tick Tock People

A Poem by Davidgeo
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its sound is silent
perpetual and inevitable
universally local
its effect is deafening
profound, unstoppable
immediately fleeting
descending the abyss
a ghost on a mission
its feeling is palpable
indescribable
soul grating
reality warping
anxiety inducing
madness incarnate
its touch is numbing
slowly less painful
soothing, shaping
distorting
eroding sensation eventually
patiently unfolding the mind 
sinking it deeper
and deeper to sleep 
in the silence
we won't mind

© 2025 Davidgeo


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I liked this one a lot, too. The descriptions are super intense. That last line, after all that intensity, "We won't mind." Very poignant. Good job c:

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Davidgeo
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