traps

we are here for the light

what is fading

we struggle we fight

we cannot let go

we stay through the night

Author's Note

Reviews

[Beren]

honestly, even though it's just a few sentences, it touched me a lot. very powerful words!
i thought about how important the first two sentences are in life, the things we strive for, the events we run towards. and for some reason, people always reach their dreams, always! the problem is that people don't even realize they've reached their dreams because at that point, something else has already fallen apart or they realize that this isn't the truth they believed in. "we are here for the light what is fading" i wanted to get a tattoo of this quote, damn it. it's really powerful and deep.

there are some quotes that you want to underline or take a screenshot of so you never forget them (new generation), this is exactly the kind of quote that i can stick on my mirror as a post it. i'm going to get a pen.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks man. I'm glad you like it. I appreciate you.

[schlanks]

The message stands tall in this poem's brevity and flows quite nicely

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Schlanks