There is Venom In the Antidote

There is Venom In the Antidote

A Poem by Davidgeo
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With very fine words
We rob the criminal
We justify the justice, everyday
We hope for permanence
In a better light, today, tomorrow
We hope to continue 
Through better actions
We adapt to scenario
From these words, into action
We redefine our nature
Into the more human animal
Refined with words
we hope, we pray, are not criminal (in our scenario)

© 2025 Davidgeo


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sometimes it can hard to tell just who are the good guys and the bad. i think my an thoreau had it right when he wrote, “When the true criminals are running around free, the only honorable place for a decent human being is in prisons.” i like the thought in this.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

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If your moral compass depends upon outward belief who are you really? Have you really seen your own.. read more
Davidgeo

1 Day Ago

That sounded confrontational... I was just ranting. I'm not to be taken seriously
Re-Pete

1 Day Ago

no, not confrontational at all - just discussing. i think we're born with a "good" moral compass bu.. read more



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sometimes it can hard to tell just who are the good guys and the bad. i think my an thoreau had it right when he wrote, “When the true criminals are running around free, the only honorable place for a decent human being is in prisons.” i like the thought in this.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Day Ago

If your moral compass depends upon outward belief who are you really? Have you really seen your own.. read more
Davidgeo

1 Day Ago

That sounded confrontational... I was just ranting. I'm not to be taken seriously
Re-Pete

1 Day Ago

no, not confrontational at all - just discussing. i think we're born with a "good" moral compass bu.. read more

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Johnsburg, IL



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