Looks Fine to Me

While you fail spectacularly

You can succeed materially

While you despise the world 

You can embrace its reward

While you love what you do

You can still hate who you are

Between you and yourself

A spectacular failure

Playing an epic success 

As long as it works

No one can tell

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pete]

a rolling stone gathers no moss. it's hard to hit a moving target. keep 'em guessing. "What a man thinks of himself, that it is which determines, or rather indicates, his fate." - thoreau