Hearts of Clay

as the present becomes further

each day from the beginning 

I see how youth is malleable 

how age is like a rock

that the present is more like plastic

slowly changing

in transition 

hardening

slowly 

as the present becomes further

each day from the beginning

Author's Note

Reviews

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

The imagery of youth being malleable like clay and age being solid like rock is powerful and evocative. The comparison of the present to plastic, slowly hardening, adds a layer of introspection about how we change and solidify over time. It's a thoughtful and reflective piece that invites readers to ponder their own journey through life.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Gregoria. Everyone has to age... no one gets away. Isn't it fun? Sometimes more than others of course...

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

You're welcome! Aging is indeed an inevitable part of life, and it brings its own unique experiences and wisdom. While it can be challenging at times, it also offers opportunities for growth and reflection. Embracing the journey with a positive outlook can make it a rewarding adventure. Here's to finding joy in every stage of life! 😁🥂

[Davidgeo]

Yes, indeed... let us toast... To joy!! May we see each other on the other side of our adventure! Cheers... and happy new year my dear

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

Happy New Year my friend!

[Laz K.]

we are made of clay, hearts and all. earth to earth...one day, we shall re-turn to "clay."
but the heart is not just a material organ; it has an invisible counterpart, and that actually opens up more and more as one ages, for it does not belong to the earth.

[Davidgeo]

as we age, the spirit releases. I feel you Laz K. Thank you for reviewing me.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Awesome introspection and metaphoric projection. May we be mouldable for longer and keep further nearer each day!

[Davidgeo]

Further nearer each day... ha... that's a funny way of putting that.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Yup! Kinda twists the logic of both words.😊

[Davidgeo]

Or straightens it out in a twisted kind of way.

[redd Brick Keshner]

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