The Art of Grievance

The Art of Grievance

A Poem by Davidgeo
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America and Me

"
It will be negative
The art of grievance
It can feel positive
Quite convenient
Something soothing
Reliable
Reinforcing
Almost nostalgic
You will remember
this feeling past 
But you will never learn
how to feel the present
Just how you felt
... and not for long
It's always fleeting
going nowhere always
The art of grievance
one step forward
Two lost in argument
Always...
g f y

© 2024 Davidgeo


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With a honed-in, scaled-back stroke, you deliver something profound. It recalled for me Ella Winters' line, "You can't go home again."

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Months Ago

Thanks Jolly Day. That's a pretty generous review.
Joli Dy

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome, Davey Jones.
Grievance is a beginning as though... a Song has a Melody which follows a Score to be carried along in Stanzas... hopefully to a Crescendo of possibilities... my friend...softly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

............gfy?...........

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This could credibly apply to so many societal issues ...so it IS understandable but to me the vagueness of which issue is distracting.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Months Ago

Could it really?
Chris

2 Months Ago

Hi, and yes I think it could apply.

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Added on November 30, 2024
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Davidgeo
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Johnsburg, IL



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