The Art of Grievance
A Poem by
Davidgeo
America and Me
It will be negative
The art of grievance
It can feel positive
Quite convenient
Something soothing
Reliable
Reinforcing
Almost nostalgic
You will remember
this feeling past
But you will never learn
how to feel the present
Just how you felt
... and not for long
It's always fleeting
going nowhere always
The art of grievance
one step forward
Two lost in argument
Always...
g f y
© 2024 Davidgeo
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With a honed-in, scaled-back stroke, you deliver something profound. It recalled for me Ella Winters' line, "You can't go home again."
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks Jolly Day. That's a pretty generous review.
2 Months Ago
You're very welcome, Davey Jones.
Grievance is a beginning as though... a Song has a Melody which follows a Score to be carried along in Stanzas... hopefully to a Crescendo of possibilities... my friend...softly, Pat
Posted 2 Months Ago
Grievance is a beginning as though... a Song has a Melody which follows a Score to be carried along in Stanzas... hopefully to a Crescendo of possibilities... my friend...softly, Pat
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
............gfy?...........
Posted 2 Months Ago
............gfy?...........
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This could credibly apply to so many societal issues ...so it IS understandable but to me the vagueness of which issue is distracting.
Posted 2 Months Ago
This could credibly apply to so many societal issues ...so it IS understandable but to me the vagueness of which issue is distracting.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Could it really?
2 Months Ago
Hi, and yes I think it could apply.
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Added on November 30, 2024
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