Lead Us To Follow

Lead Us To Follow

A Poem by Davidgeo
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follow me
I will show you
self worth
at great personal expense
you will f*****g pay us
for loss of innocence
you will be awarded 
my friend 
so...
here we go
now here we are
here to stay
indefinitely
just like them
 now it's you
just like me then
another one, here
here we go
to join the rest
on and on
over again
one more time
hear this now
now Follow me
I will show you how to lead
just get in line
make friends with your enemy

© 2024 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
DO NOT make friends with your enemy. Reread this if that's what you got out of me

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This poem powerfully explores themes of self-worth and the complexities of relationships. The repetition creates a strong rhythm, and the message about making friends with your enemy is thought-provoking. Well done!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


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Davidgeo

3 Weeks Ago

Most people don't know who their enemies really are until it's too late. (you are probably your own.. read more

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Added on October 25, 2024
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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