Precious

Precious

A Poem by Davidgeo
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you may run here
to keep time busy
you may hide there
for the entertainment
though escape, you cannot
  
you're already here now
  the clock has been started
you will already be there 
  when this clock it does end
one way or another 
  eventually
the very same point
at a very different time
 the whole of everything
 precious
  

© 2024 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo


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I like the way the start and the end almost contradict each other in that same way us silly purpose-seeking humans do. Knowing how every last moment we're afforded is incomprehensibly precious, yet always feeling like whatever we do amounts to no more than keeping time busy. Well put, and thought-provoking.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Months Ago

Thanks schalnks. I think we agree on what this might be about.



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I like the way the start and the end almost contradict each other in that same way us silly purpose-seeking humans do. Knowing how every last moment we're afforded is incomprehensibly precious, yet always feeling like whatever we do amounts to no more than keeping time busy. Well put, and thought-provoking.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Months Ago

Thanks schalnks. I think we agree on what this might be about.

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Added on August 23, 2024
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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