Lying

liars

without the bedrock

you cannot trust the ground

the dirt may be unclean

the foundation untrue

without the bedrock

it all falls from a ground

  into the sea of truth

Author's Note

Reviews

[Amanda Reynolds]

Wow! I love your poem, the only thing I would change is perhaps leaving off the last line and let it be implied- (but that's just my humble opinion) look forward to reading more of your writing. And, I love the lines "without the bedrock
you cannot trust the ground" Thank you for sharing!

[Davidgeo]

Oh that's good advice. I can't change it now, but, if you gave me that tip earlier I totally would have. Thanks Amanda Reynolds. You are a helpful human.

[Amanda Reynolds]

I love your poem either way, please feel free to give me feedback on any of mine;)