Perpetually Incorrect

you can blame the question

if you never learned how to ask

what came first?

I say it's not your fault

why your answer is dogshit

when you were never taught...

... some never learned

so some never teach

and around it goes

again and again

dogshit, perpetually, dogshit

you can blame the question

you can blame the answer

it does not matter...

eventually

(the truth)

you will see

 

 there is no question...

 there is no answer

it's just us

and a shitload of choices

Author's Note

Reviews

[GlendaK]

Hi, I'm reviewing Perpetually Incorrect
A Poem by Davidgeo
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David, it seems you are dumping alot of animosity here tho I don't know what spurred you to write this. I like that you asked a question besides being entirely consumed with your animosity. You say "You will see" as if you are very experienced at being the target of dogshit. Or s**t in general. Anyway, I like it. Thanks for reviewing my stuff, whatever it was.

[Davidgeo]

It's not animosity. It's self discovery. I'm sorry if you're not a fan. Not everyone can identify, no hard feelings.

[GlendaK]

David, please don't take offense at my review. You seem to be outspoken so I want to be as well. You even say in your own poem that we need to learn how to ask. I am definitely a fan, btw. I hope we can be friends.

[Davidgeo]

It's all good. No worries. I am outspoken. But you have to say some fucked up s**t to me first. I'm happy you decided to review me.

[GlendaK]

Like what? What would piss you off so bad?

[Davidgeo]

To me it doesn't seem like a good idea to elaborate.

[GlendaK]

Good answer. (:

[light and ashes]

I like your conclusion.. ..