edited Intimidation

edited Intimidation

A Poem by Davidgeo
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it did, it worked... well done, best therapy I've had in years. I am indebted.

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edit..I'm not going to change this writing or delete it for a while if at all because I think I should own the shame of my reaction.  Thank you, divya.  This was helpful, I'm sorry I induced that kind of reaction out of you, it's an ugly thing, that kind of anger makes everyone feel gross and you are correct, this was all of my own doing... I am responsible for all of this, including your reaction.  As someone mentioned the other day, I am indeed my own worst enemy.  I will do my best to make the best of this, I will learn from this.

I do have to admit, some of the doodley stuff...  Well done, that's just, spectacular. It's painful of course, but, I can appreciate the "art" of those insults.  I compliment you on your, productive trolling.  


D
umb are the tools of the bullies and cowards
Intimidation types of the persuasion
Via an internet connection
Yelling together from a lonely silence
Awash with rage... all the tools, the bullies, the cowards
                                          (unnamed)

---  by David Demers

© 2024 Davidgeo


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I like it. The rage, guilt, shame, the compacity for character reflection and raw selfish expression is what makes poetry relatable. With the note and all, I’d leave it up. I think you’d be surprised how many people feel the same.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Davidgeo

5 Months Ago

Thank you.

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