individually

individually

A Poem by Davidgeo
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too much

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try and see everything 
and you will understand nothing
the light will blind you
the waters will drown you
the air will suffocate you
oblivious and confused
buried in the light
stuck within the dirt
you will never see
you will choke upon life
you will never live

© 2024 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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The title has me reflecting on individual knowledge and skills/strengths coming together to be/create something better. Progress is taken in baby steps.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Davidgeo

6 Months Ago

That had crossed my mind coming up with this. The main theme I had in mind was trying to learn ever.. read more

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Added on May 13, 2024
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Johnsburg, IL



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