Pleasantly Circling the Drain

Pleasantly Circling the Drain

A Poem by Davidgeo
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My Pleasantly Decaying Orbit

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as time becomes heavy
as age begins to weigh
  
memories become paintings
memories become stains
  memory it dissipates
   
I am not afraid of losing these things
I am excited over what I might gain
 
as the beginning becomes further
as the ending becomes nearer
   the pictures become clearer
 fear begins to dissipate
as the stains fade into paintings
 
the weight begins to lift
the painting begins to make sense
on the way down, this uplifts me
 
I will become lighter as I sink
I know the weight now, it doesn't matter 
perhaps it never did

© 2024 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Embracing life's changes, and welcoming the unknown journey ahead with acceptance and lightness. This is the message i get from your poem. It's a good message.

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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