Self Worker

Self Worker

A Poem by Davidgeo
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Work it hard

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I am certain he would lie to us.  I am certain he has lied to us.  And I am certain he will lie to us again.
 
she does not listen to me. she only hears me to respond accordingly.
    she is the other half of my sentence, but she will not tell me
that I know that we both know...
our Life as nothing but a liar's fantasy
 
our curse of disordered personality
we will never admit to knowing,
(we will never...)
 
I am certain, we are liars
it's probably true?

© 2024 Davidgeo


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This one has the sound of a back and forth between two people who have some type of personality disorder. One believes the other is a liar, while that one believes the first will not listen. I wonder about the capitalization of their "Life," but perhaps they need to give one another some distance for a while.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Months Ago

I like your interpretation here.

This was about what it was like to date an adult a.. read more



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Meaning full lines.

she is the other half of my sentence, particularly I am obsessed with this line. Good poem

Posted 7 Months Ago


This one has the sound of a back and forth between two people who have some type of personality disorder. One believes the other is a liar, while that one believes the first will not listen. I wonder about the capitalization of their "Life," but perhaps they need to give one another some distance for a while.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

7 Months Ago

I like your interpretation here.

This was about what it was like to date an adult a.. read more

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Added on April 13, 2024
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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