Heat

Heat

A Poem by Davidgeo
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what burns why we burn?

i am just a tool made of tools

and i have forgotten myself, how to make tools
from other tools

now there are words
from the other's letters
copies of an instruction manual

distorted personally

into a brilliant stupidity

a tool made of tools
a disorder made of dysfunction

a damn made to break

what purpose made this purpose?
this river 
what will flow and what still flows
for we do have time
time time time to die
we know this, but not why

© 2024 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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An existential piece here, and something of a somber one. The speaker seems to belittle himself, mentioning an instruction manual made of the letters of others, which he distorted into "a brilliant stupidity." There are other instances also, which have a self deprecating air to them. The last verse seems to take a different tack, saying we have time, but indicating it is just time to die. This poem shows deep thinking, but I wouldn't send it to a depressed person.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

Too much time is torture. Life needs to die so life can really live. I ask the question, why? Why.. read more



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We live we work we try to find purpose and then when time has come to a close we die

At
Least this is what this poem spoken to me when I read it. Just my humble thoughts

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An existential piece here, and something of a somber one. The speaker seems to belittle himself, mentioning an instruction manual made of the letters of others, which he distorted into "a brilliant stupidity." There are other instances also, which have a self deprecating air to them. The last verse seems to take a different tack, saying we have time, but indicating it is just time to die. This poem shows deep thinking, but I wouldn't send it to a depressed person.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

Too much time is torture. Life needs to die so life can really live. I ask the question, why? Why.. read more

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Johnsburg, IL



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