The Forms of Shape

why can you not submit to the submission?

can you not give a little love back to god?

as your heart is twisted, your soul is blind

yes you may know, but still you cannot see

the pearl we share, inside of every mind

Author's Note

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

This one is interesting because it seems to speak of spirituality over religion. The tone is one of reproach, the addressee being castigated for spiritual blindness, which prevents them from seeing the pearl within every mind. Not sure if the non-capitalized "god" is significant or not.

[Davidgeo]

No significance to the g in god with this one. You're right about the spirituality over religion theme... I think that is the point of all religion, finding our spirituality. The particular religion someone uses to find that is probably secondary. the god lies in every mind, but not every mind can see the god that lies inside.

[Poetic Beauty]

Words for thought. I deep pondering poem