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Welcome All

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there you are again
a guest in your own body   

have you ever felt estranged from your host?

"you are only alone if you feel you are alone"

i hear myself say

"loneliness is an illusion, my friend"

he tells me to remind myself

"illusions, they can be controlled"

he takes my hand

"you are not alone, as we are all alone...

 in here now is where you belong, welcome home..."

and we meet again
but not for the last time

© 2024 Davidgeo


Author's Note

Davidgeo
listen to this in its entirety (i know, I know..it's pretty long and weird) such is life...

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I found this one interesting, as I have written about the condition called loneliness myself. The speaker here mentions an estrangement from this body which he calls the host. A dialogue follows, in which the main point is that loneliness is a perception, but also an illusion, which can be controlled. There is an agreement that we are not really alone. The last lines indicate this is a reunion which will be deepened. Thus it ends on a note of hope.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

10 Months Ago

I actually found it productive just repeating it back to me like that... did you do that on purpose.. read more
John the Baptist

10 Months Ago

No, not on purpose. But I have long been interested in the concept of loneliness as a choice.
Davidgeo

10 Months Ago

I spent nearly an entire decade with someone I only attracted because I was pretending to be someone.. read more



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I feel that at times, loneliness is a difficulty causing feelings of sadness, but being alone can often be necessary and enjoyable

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this one interesting, as I have written about the condition called loneliness myself. The speaker here mentions an estrangement from this body which he calls the host. A dialogue follows, in which the main point is that loneliness is a perception, but also an illusion, which can be controlled. There is an agreement that we are not really alone. The last lines indicate this is a reunion which will be deepened. Thus it ends on a note of hope.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

10 Months Ago

I actually found it productive just repeating it back to me like that... did you do that on purpose.. read more
John the Baptist

10 Months Ago

No, not on purpose. But I have long been interested in the concept of loneliness as a choice.
Davidgeo

10 Months Ago

I spent nearly an entire decade with someone I only attracted because I was pretending to be someone.. read more
Powerful work. Very relatable.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 22, 2024
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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