Advice on Commitment

Never sell yourself to the wrong person. Give yourself to the right one.

decorate your person

improve your life

if you can with other people

  share existence

intimately and if you can frequently

(if you are so lucky)

love all of the lovely people

though never lie to yourself

  define the term enable

before you very truly risk yourself

to the depths of anothers insides

remind yourself

  you are always able

  always, to walk away from any fable

for the truth,   that the very beautiful stories

         can too quickly become the most dangerous poisons 

devastating disasters

a wasted life

a broken heart

dysfunctional children

confused familial relations

hatred

spite

guilt 

shame

regret or if you' are unlucky

    Jealousy the one with the capital J 

in a general ruination of the emotional self

 pure self loathing

 a loss of hope...

an acceptance of despair... this can be real

really real

that is the truth today

as it will be tomorrow

like it was yesterday

so always decorate your life

but never at the expense of it

rather, only to make the most of it

 and more than one person will thank you

(and less people would hate each other)

Author's Note

Reviews

[Gaia Octavia]

Love that first line. Great imagery and sets the mood right away. Very relatable. Well done!

[Masked writer]

Wow, this is so factual.. I feel like anyone can relate to this as well.. Absolutly amazing
Mw

[Davidgeo]

That's pretty much the best compliment I could hope for.

[Masked writer]

well..Commitment is very dangerous in manys eyes...Almost as if drinking..some burn, some go down smoothly..and either way you just go with it until you remember nothing or your emotions get the better of you