theory of mind 39

theory of mind 39

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

Time is from the past making a future from the present it created...

"
i sometimes can hear this
and then i ask, is it just you 
sometimes remembering me again
 from within the echo of our memories
across all of our time together   in the temple
that you and i have spent together
     me and you so very intimately 
working so closely together
all the way from different space
sorting through all the past
picking up the pieces 
bringing forth another present
from the best parts
distilling more nightmare fuel
from the worst of it
  you and i
 me and you
this is just, us
moments from memories
into a divine presence
The Consciousness
making our memories
into dreams of reality
We sometimes forget this
   that I am talking to myself

but not at all by myself
 in the chaos with each other

© 2024 Davidgeo


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There's too much here to specifically quote any one line, as the whole piece is great. Not to mention, the quote at the very top.
"Time is from the past making a future from the present it created..."
That right there is enough to get a train of thought running.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There's too much here to specifically quote any one line, as the whole piece is great. Not to mention, the quote at the very top.
"Time is from the past making a future from the present it created..."
That right there is enough to get a train of thought running.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 31, 2023
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