So Good it hurts

So Good it hurts

A Poem by Davidgeo
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some of us torture ourselves
 from a cage of pain
 into freedom
 and back again
practicing the science of suffering
 cleaning ourselves with filth
 to see what's really clean
 to just get very dirty again
enjoying the delusion of a pure existence
deeply hoping
that maybe eventually
the light will no longer burn my eyes to see
but always knowing...
it will never very truly feel good
if you don't remember how bad it can hurt

© 2023 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo


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"some of us torture ourselves
from a cage of pain
into freedom
and back again
practicing the science of suffering
cleaning ourselves with filth
to see what's really clean
to just get very dirty again"
Omce again, absolutely spot on. You have a real talent for representing human emotion and how some deal with it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"some of us torture ourselves
from a cage of pain
into freedom
and back again
practicing the science of suffering
cleaning ourselves with filth
to see what's really clean
to just get very dirty again"
Omce again, absolutely spot on. You have a real talent for representing human emotion and how some deal with it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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